Here is the link to my elevator speech: https://youtu.be/_X6tsoo_Kck
2.) I never received any feedback from last time because I did not do the first assignment. This is technically my first elevator speech in that respect. I did notice that it was very difficult to find the right angle to record the video. I ended up just putting my laptop on top of my refrigerator as that was the only place that could best capture me.
3.) As mentioned before, I didn't really change anything because this is my first time submitting the assignment.
Please criticize my elevator speech. Be honest: don't worry about hurting my feelings.
Thank you!
Hey Matthew,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job on this. I like your hook as it drew me in and got me invested right away. You did a good job thoroughly explaining what your company does and how they are solving a problem. My only suggestion would be to try and peed up your talking pace a little bit. But overall good work.